2021高考英语作文真题及满分范文(二)(2021高考英语新高考一卷)

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1、【2021·浙江卷·第一节】 使用文写作
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘自愿者,招待来访的国外大学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
1. 口语才能:
2. 有关经历;
3. 应聘意图。
留心:
1. 词数80支配;
2. 可以恰当添加细节,以使行文联接。
【解析】本篇书面表达归于使用文,需求写应聘信。【满分范文】
dear sir or madam,
my name is li hua. and i am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school english association.  
i have a good command of english and have been to the usa twice. so i can communicate well with native speakers of english. what’s more, i am kind and friendly to other people. so i can easily get along with foreign students.
i’m particularly interested in this job because i want to further improve my oral english capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
hopefully i can receive your acceptance.
yours faithfully,
li hua

2、【2021·浙江卷·第二节】读后续写
阅览下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个无缺的故事。
it was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.
he decided to take me on a trip to the wild west.
we took a plane to albuquerque, a big city in the state of new mexico.
we reached albuquerque in the late afternoon. uncle paul, my dad’s friend,
picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in pecos.
his wife tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons ryan and kyle.
my dad and i spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to
the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. very early in the morning,
uncle paul woke us up to have breakfast. my dad cried back.
after a while uncle paul and his fam house were out of sight. it was so peaceful and quiet
and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun
mixed to create a magic scene. it looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread
out upon the ground just for us.
suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

留心:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为150支配;
(2)至少运用5个短文中标有下划线的要害词语:
(3)续写有些分为两段,每段的最初语已为你写好;
(4)续写结束后,请用下划线标出你所运用的要害词语。

paragraph 1: suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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paragraph 2: we had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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【满分范文】
paragraph 1
suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. instinctively, i yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and i did as told. finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.
paragraph 2
we had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. time appeared to be merrier and shorter when i stayed together with dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. what a thrilling but memorable experience it was!

3、【2021·天津卷】
假定你是晨光大学的机器人快乐喜爱小组组长李津,你的美国兄弟chris就读于天津某世界学校,
他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你方案聘请他参加你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举办的世界青少学
机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表快乐喜爱小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)竞赛的时刻、地址;
(2)聘请他的缘由;
(3)练习方案将发送其邮箱,请他提出主张。
留心:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可恰当参加细节,使内容充分、行文联接;
(3)最初和结束已给出,不计入总词数。
【参阅词汇】
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the world adolescent robotics competition
dear chris,
i have good news to tell you.
i’m looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li jin
【满分范文】
dear chris,
i have good news to tell you. targeted at cultivating the teenagers’ interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the world adolescent robotics competition, will take place in the children’s palace tianjin in the late july. the competition offers adolescents a good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each other meanwhile.
i am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. as far as i know, you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous competitions. impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this field, i am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. by working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring others strong points as well as double our achievements.
if you are interested in it, please let me know and i will deliver the training program to your online mailbox. it would be fantastic if you could bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. i’m looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li jin

4、【2021·江苏卷】
请阅览下面文字,并依照需求用英语写一篇150 词支配的文章。
li jiang 6 july, sunnyour family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. two days ago, mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. but the information i got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. confused, i simply based my decision on the ratings. within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. this afternoon, mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.
su hua 6 july, sunnythis morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. we found a rating of the top ten restaurants, and went into one of them. we spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. i was puzzled. should i believe in these ratings, or should i not? 【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词归纳上述使用排名(ratings)进行花费的表象;
2. 谈谈你如何看待花费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。
【写作需求】
1. 写作进程中不能直接引证原文语句;
2. 作文中不能呈现真实名字和学校称号;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容无缺,言语标准,语篇联接,词数恰当。
【解析】
本年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用30词归纳阅览材料,然后关于资猜中的论题写一篇谈论文谈观点。首要要细心阅览两段有关花费排名表象及观念的纯文字材料,然后进行比照和分析,标明情绪,作出价值判别。【满分范文一】
as a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
i tend to consult consumption ratings whatever i purchase. firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. based on the ratings, i bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. for example, there are huge a
2021高考英语作文真题及满分范文(二)(2021高考英语新高考一卷)插图
mounts of reference books which i am often confused to choose from. in that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
there is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. the advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. it is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
【满分范文二】
nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. these ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers purchase decision. however, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
there is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. as we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. apparently, blindly following others advice will affect our own judgment. another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. it has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

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