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2018年景人学位英语考试，怎么拿高分作文
2018年学位英语考试马上就要降临啦！大有些考生对英语作文可以有深深的“恨意”。
下面为各位预备了一篇范文，期望能协助到我们。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Commercialization of Campus Music. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)这些年学校音乐逐步走向商业化，由公司建议主办的大学生音乐节、学校歌手大赛层出不穷
2)致使这种表象的缘由是啥
3)这种表象可以带来的影响
【思路指点】
本题归于提纲式文字出题。提纲第1点指出一种表象，提纲第2点需求分析致使这种表象的缘由，提纲第3点需求阐明该表象可以带来的影响，由此可推知这篇文章应为表象说明型作文。
根据所给提纲，这篇文章应包括如下内容：描绘这些年公司热心于举办大学生音乐节、学校歌手大赛的表象;分析致使这种表象的缘由;阐明该表象可以带来的影响。
【参阅范文】
Commercialization of Campus Music
In recent years, campus music has been commercialized gradually. More and more enterprises are interested in being the sponsors of college music festivals or award competitions of campus singers. Campus singers and songs are not confined to college campus any more but being pushed to the market gradually.
The following factors can account for this phenomenon. On the one hand, some enterprises' paying more attention to campus music is out of their sense of commitment to the society. They want to set healthy enterprise images before the public. On the other hand, nowadays entertainment marketing is very popular. Enterprises want to utilize entertainment activities to improve their notability and influence. College students, as the focus of the who
le society, are a good choice for these enterprises. Of course, these musical activities have brought more chances for campus singers to show their talents to the public. Besides, campus songs have gotten more wide spreading. However, commercialization of campus music to some extent reduces its uniqueness. Induced by fame and wealth, some campus singers try to cater to the tastes of the public and lost their own styles gradually.
Therefore, in order to make campus music develop more healthily, both the sponsors of music activities and our campus singers should pay more attention on music itself but not profits.
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